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Defining Research

» Finding a Topic
» Writing a Thesis
» Outlining
» Revising and Editing
» Requirements
» Searching for Sources
» Staying Organized
» Structuring Paper
» Plagiarism
» Additional Resources

 


Defining Research

What is research?

Research is finding meaningful paths through overwhelming amounts of information; the ability to use appropriate navigational skills in the information age.

Research is acquiring, processing and applying information effectively.

Research is persistence, patience, and pertinence.

Research is examining information as opposed to just answering questions; it enables the participant to "use" information for learning.

Research is limited; it is only as good as the information on hand and the participant is able to comprehend and to apply.

 

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Finding a Topic

So, what are you going to research for your paper?

Obviously you are going to spend considerable time and energy on this paper, so I suggest that you choose something you like and would enjoy researching.

There are several ways to go about finding the perfect topic for you.  But remember that you are not writing a report.  I do not want to read about the state of Idaho or Woodstock or the dangers of drinking and driving.

Rather, I would like to see you think of HOW and WHY questions.  Look for problems that are solvable or issues on which you can take a stand.  I know that I told you that you cannot use I or at all refer to yourself in your paper, but that does not mean that you can not express your views, beliefs, opinions, or values.  Know that if you are writing the paper and you do not document it as someone else's then I know it must belong to you.  So if you want to say-- professional wrestling is popular with today's youth because it shows the classic battle of good and evil, allows them to vent their frustrations in a non-violent way, and is funny because of the twisted story lines and crazy characters--say it!  Just don't start with:  I think that... or In my opinion... or I believe that...

So where do you begin?

The first thing is to make a list of things you are interested in researching. For example, my list might include things like teaching, professional wrestling, dogs, the environment, and gender communication.  Create your list.

Now, think about things you are interested in studying in college.  For example, if you know that you want to be a teacher, then you might find doing a research paper on an issue in education helpful.  Those of you wanting to study medicine might finding doing something in the health care / medical area fascinating.

Still no ideas?

Try reading the newspaper or skimming Time magazine. What issues plague our society? Environment, politics, terrorism, the economy.

If you are still struggling, try one of these options.

Go to a search engine like Yahoo or Google.  Pick a category that is of interest to you and continue to narrow in on that topic until you find something of interest.

The Internet even includes some web sites designed for searching for research paper topics.  Check on some of these:

Idea Generator
Idea Directory

Remember to type your topic in the form of a question.  For example, I might choose one of the following questions for my paper:
    Why has professional wrestling grown in popularity over the past few years?
    How did the Cultural Revolution affect China and is it still having an effect?

All topics must be approved.

Hint:  Your thesis statement will actually be your answer to the question you pose for your topic.

 

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Writing a Thesis

A thesis statement is like the topic sentence for the entire paper.  It provides direction for both you the writer and for the reader.  This sentence explains what you believe your research will prove.

    When you began your research paper, you asked a question.  Essentially, you can consider your thesis statement the answer to the question.  For example, in Writer's Inc., the subject of a paper was reintroducing gray wolves into the lower 48 states.  The writer asked this question:  What programs are currently in effect to reintroduce the gray wolf into the lower 48 states?  The thesis statement for that paper then became this statement:  The current programs to reintroduce the gray wolf into the lower 48 states are/ are not achieving the desired results.  Based on the research, the writer would either state the programs are working or that they are not meeting the goals.

Here are some other sample thesis statements on various topics:

  • Microcomputer programs can have a positive effect on students' writing if both the potentials and limitations of the programs are understood.

  • The eras of English Romanticism and American Transcendentalism show many similarities in their origins, literary styles and themes, and the effects they had on society both at that time and throughout time.

  • Recent studies of depression suggest that it is much more closely related to physiology than scientists had preciously thought.

Regardless of the topic, Writer's Inc. suggests following these guidelines for writing a thesis statement:

  • Select a general subject

  • Narrow your subject

  • Propose a question about your topic that is beyond a mere yes or no

  • Compose a thesis statement that answers your question

Then check your statement using this list:

  • Make sure your thesis statement focuses on a single, limited subject.

  • Make sure your thesis is stated in a clear, direct sentence

  • Make sure your thesis conveys your point of view or attitude about the topic.

  • Make sure you have access to enough good information to support your thesis statement.

  • Make sure your thesis directs you to write a paper that meets all the requirements of the assignment.

Once you compose your thesis, make sure that you use it as a guide while you are researching and writing.  For example, if you were writing a paper using the thesis statement about wolves, you would not want the bulk of your paper to be about why we should protect wolves.  Instead, you want to focus on  whether or not current programs are protecting and reintroducing wolves into the continental United States.

Your thesis will be a guide--a compass--that directs the course of your paper.  However, some of you may find that you have to adjust or fine tune your thesis throughout the process to better reflect the route your paper takes.  That is fine; however, I strongly recommend that you do not change topics completely.

Remember to put your thesis statement at the top of your outline.

For more information on writing a thesis statement, check out one of these sites:
Research Paper Help
Nuts and Bolts:  Thesis

 

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Outlining

Once you have found your research, the best way to work on the structure is to create an outline.  The more detailed the outline the more helpful.  Then, the outline will guide you in your writing.  Remember that on the typed outline you turn in to me, you need to have your thesis statement at the top.  Make sure that you follow proper outline format.

The Roman numerals in an outline should designate main topics.  Underneath are letters.  Usually each of this represents a paragraph; however, you may find that you have so much information you will subdivide the letters into numerals.  Each section of the outline builds on the other.  The first statements are the most general (Roman numerals) then get more and more specific.  Outlines can be done in complete sentences or in phrases.  See the following example--

Thesis:  Microcomputer programs can have a positive effect on students' writing if both the potentials and limitations of the programs are understood.
I.  Major Steps in the Writing Process
    A.  Organizing
    B.  Writing the first draft
    C.  Evaluating
    D.  Revising
II. Writing Programs for the Microcomputer
    A.  Types of Program and Their Relationship to Writing
            1.  Thought
                    a.  Use in organizing
                    b.  Use in revising
            2.  Word Processors
                    a.  Use in writing the first draft
                    b.  Use in revising
            3.  Analytical programs:  grammar, style, spelling
                    a.  Use in evaluating
                    b.  Use in revising
    B.  Positive and Negative Aspects of Computer Writing

The outline continues in this form to address all aspects of the paper and to fulfill the ideas in the thesis statement.  Please note that if you use an A then you must have a B.

If you need to go beyond a then use small roman numerals (for example i, ii, iii).

A good outline will not only guide you through your writing but will also help you in finding places where you need additional research and evidence to support your statements.

For more information on outlining, check out one of these sites:
A Guide for Writing Research Papers
How to Write an Essay
Research Paper Help
Purdue On-Line Writing Lab
Nuts and Bolts of College Writing

 

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Revising and Editing

You must revise and edit your paper.  There is no simple way to do it, but I will offer some suggestions.

First, please remember that revising deals with content, structure, and style.  Editing involves spelling, grammar, mechanics, and usage.

For both revising and editing, I suggest that you do the following things.  These steps will help you find mistakes that your eye may not see.

  • Read the paper word by word.

  • Read the paper aloud or to someone else.  Your ear will often hear mistakes that your eye misses.

  • Ask someone else to read the paper.

Do all of these not just one or the other.

When revising, watch for the following problems:

  •  Lack of Content

  •  Lack of Focus

  •  Passive Voice or Weak Verbs

  •  Overworked Expressions, Clichés

  •  Evidence Does not Support Thesis

  •  Informal Writing

  •  Boring Sentences (lacks variety in style and length)

  •  Nonsequiturs (needs transitions between ideas)

Editing, on the other hand, deals with a different set of concerns.

  •  Sentence Structure

  •  Awkward or Incorrect Word Choice

  •  Spelling

  •  End Punctuation

  •  Commas, Semicolons, Colons

  •  Apostrophes for Possession (no contractions)

  •  Weak Verbs

  •  Quotation Marks

  •  Capital Letters

  •  Misused Words (like to, too, and two)

  •  Using you

  •  Subject Verb Agreement

  •  Pronoun Problems

  •  Use the word this with a noun after

Research Paper Specific Checklist

  • Heading and Title

  • Page Numbers

  • Double Space

  • In text Citation (punctuation after)

  • Introduce Quotes

  • Block Format

  • No "island" Quotes


For more information or help on the revising and editing of your research paper, check out these sites:

How to Write an Essay
Research Paper Help

 

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Requirements

Grade Length of Paper
Freshman 2-3 pages
Sophomores 2-3 pages
Juniors 3-4 pages
Seniors 4-7 pages

Sources: On obtaining sources (internet, newspaper, book, etc.) and citing sources are up to the individual teacher. 

Organization:  Paper must include a beginning, middle, and end.  Make sure you use the proper heading, a centered title, and page numbers. Thesis statement must be underlined in the first paragraph.

Point of ViewPaper should be written in third person.  Do not use I or you.  Avoid slang, clichés, and colloquial contractions.

Documentation:  Any fact or idea that is not general knowledge or has not originated with the writer of the paper must be documented with parenthetical references.  Paraphrases, summaries, and direct quotations must be documented.  No more than 10% of the paper may be directly quoted.  Any direct quote of five lines or longer should be done in block format.  Block format means that it is indented ten spaces from the left margin and quotation marks are not used.  All number, percentages, and statistics must be documented.  Please attribute for clarity.

 

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Searching for Sources

So, you have found a topic and now you wonder where to begin.  How do you find the information and accumulate the resources to start searching?

The first step is to understand the basics of searching.

When researching ask yourself these questions:
  

Where can I go?

What sources exist?
How accessible are they?
How appropriate is each one to the topic?
Where do I go first?

Which source do I use?

How should I choose?
What resources are there?
How can I tell which to select?
What other sources could they lead me to?

Do I have the information I need?

What do I have?
What do I think?
What does it all add up to?
Is what I have what I need?

You are fortunate because with the bridge program you have access to UE's library.  While you can access the catalogue of books from any computer in the world (use ACE), you can only access their on-line database on campus.

In addition to accessing our school media center, you can also use the public library.  You may access both their on-line databases and catalogues from off site computers as well as requesting Inter-Library Loans, material from other libraries across the country.

Finally, the Internet allows you to access a wealth of knowledge. Reliability is a key issue.  If anyone can create a web site, then you must be a smart consumer of information.  Just because someone has access does not mean they know what they are doing.  Many of the sites available on the Internet include faulty or misleading facts.  When in doubt, check it with another source, determine the reliability of the creator of the site, or ask.

While the Internet provides easy access to lots of material, please do not use this technology as your only resource.  Books, periodicals (magazines,  journals, and newspapers), films, and interviews will all prove helpful sources of information. Choose what best fits your topic not what is easiest to use.

Since most of you are Indiana residents, for example, you will find using Inspire a handy tool for tracking down periodical articles.  Many of these are available in full text, which means that the article itself is on the page.  If it is not available in full text, copy down the source information and we can find it.  When using Inspire, you can search through several databases, I personally prefer linking to the Ebsco Host.

For more information or guidance on searching for materials, check out these sites:

Classification Systems
Determining if this is the right source
Old Dominion University Library


While most of the information here is ODU Library specific, many links to determining reliability and searching for on-line materials will be helpful.
Research Paper Help in the Library
Research Paper Help on the Internet
Nuts and Bolts of Research
Constructing your Research Paper
A Student's Guide to Research with the WWW

 

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Staying Organized

Organization is a crucial part of both the researching and writing of your research paper.  In terms of researching, you need to keep up with what sources you are using, what information you are finding, and where you are finding it.  When you write, you not only need to have all this information accessible, you also need to keep your paper structured so that it fulfills the guidelines set by your thesis statement and presents evidence in a clear and concise format.

     Organization begins the moment you first start researching and continues throughout the writing of your paper.  We will address two key organizational strategies:  taking notes and maintaining a working bibliography.

Taking Notes:
There are several ways to take notes.  I personally tend to take notes in a notebook, then use that information as a guide when I write my outline.  However,  many others prefer using note cards.

A note card is simply an index card.  At the top left, you put a brief note as to where you got the information so that you can find it again if necessary.  At the top right, you put a note as to how this information relates to your topic.  Then you put your notes on the card.  Put only one piece of information per card.  For example, you might have a quote, a statistic, or a paraphrase.  Remember to put page numbers for that information so that you may document appropriately.

Writers, Inc. offers these suggestions for taking notes:

  • Keep notes on cards of the same size (for example 4x6 index cards). Write down important details and quotations, along with page numbers where this information can be found.  Also place bibliography information in the upper left corner.

  • Place quotation marks around direct quotes.  Identify the speaker. Use the ellipses . . . when you leave words out of a quotation.  Use [brackets] when you add words for clarity.

  • Look up unfamiliar words. Give each card a descriptive heading that relates it to your topic.

     When taking notes, you may use direct quotations, paraphrases, or summaries.  Summarizing, is when you reduce what you have read to a few important points in your own words.  Paraphrasing is when you restate what you have read using your own words.  Direct quotes are when you record a statement or idea word for word.  Remember to put quotation marks around these.  All information--summarized, paraphrased, or directly quoted--must be documented.

Working Bibliography:
     In addition to taking notes, you also need to keep a list of what sources you are using.  All sources used in your paper must be documented on your bibliography.  You will save yourself a great deal of time and effort if you will keep a working bibliography of sources.  Remember to use MLA format.  If you decide not to use a source, you can always delete it from your final works cited list.

     With books, I find it particularly helpful on my working bibliography to also include where I found the source (what library) and the call numbers, so that I can retrieve that book again quickly if needed.

     Some people find that doing bib cards is helpful.  Just like note cards, bib cards are index cards with all the bibliographic information for a particular source.  One source per card.  Then, when preparing your bibliography, put those cards in alphabetical order and then just flip through cards as you type.

     Others find that just keeping a notebook of sources is most helpful.
 

    For more information on taking notes or creating note and bibliography cards, check out one of these sites:
A Guide for Writing Research Papers How to Write an Essay
Research Paper Help Purdue On-Line Writing Lab
Nuts and Bolts of College Writing

 

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Structuring a Paper

Remember that you are using MLA format.

HEADING
Under this format, you do not use a title page.  Instead the following information should appear in the upper left corner:
Name
Teacher's Name
Class
Date

TITLE
Then center on the next line the title of your paper.  Title should be five words or less.  Make it something interesting.

PAGE NUMBERS
Using MLA, you put your last name and the page number on the upper right corner of each page.  Typing these in can be difficult if you try to put it in the header section.  Your computer will want to make every page the same number.  I find it easier to just start each page a line lower.  Put your last name and page number in upper right corner of first page (justify right).  HINT:  Do not put page numbers on until the very end.  Otherwise as you revise and edit your paper, you will be changing the page numbers every time.

FORMAT ISSUES
Double space your paper.
Use a legible font (like Times New Roman) and a decent size (12).
Leave one inch margins on all sides.
Include page numbers with last name in upper right corner.
Include works cited page that is alphabetized.
Remember a proper heading and title.
Meet all length and source requirements.
Do not plagiarize--cite sources!

THE PAPER
Your paper should have three distinct parts:  an introduction, body, and conclusion.

The Introduction should grab your reader's attention or interest and include your thesis statement.  You may begin with a quote, a story, background information, facts, statistics, or definitions.  Do something that makes your reader want to read more.

The Body is the major part of your paper.  It supports or proves your thesis.  Everything you say here should provide evidence that makes your thesis strong.  Work on clarity and use good transitions between paragraphs.  This is where you will use most of your sources.

The Conclusion is the final part of your paper.  It should leave your readers with a clear understanding about your topic and you view.  Do not introduce new information in the conclusion but restate your thesis.

OTHER INFORMATION FOR WRITING PAPER
Do not use or you  or any form of the words.
Use your own words as much as possible; limit direct quotes.
Avoid fragments, abbreviations, contractions, and slang.
Support with facts, statistics, and examples.
Watch crutch verbs and passive voice.
Document appropriately.
Remember you are writing a formal paper; you should use formal language.

FOR MORE INFORMATION
A Guide for Writing Research Papers (go to formatting paper)
How to Write an Essay
Nuts and Bolts of College Writing

Writers Inc. and Little, Brown Handbook are other great resources.

 

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Plagiarism

Plagiarism is cheating.  It is stealing someone else's work and  is a serious offense.  At the college, level, plagiarized papers will be failing papers and can cause a student to fail a course and even be removed from the university.  In this class, plagiarizing will result in a minimum of zero on the paper and double detentions for cheating.  Take the following information very seriously.

The Everyday Writer explains it this way:
    "Plagiarism, the use of someone else's words without crediting the other person, breaks trust with the research conversation you are a part of and with readers as well.  As a mark of dishonesty, it can destroy the credibility of both research and researcher and can result in serious consequences" (Lunsford and Connors 281).

The book goes on to explain that deliberate plagiarism is coping materials directly, knowingly cheating.  Unintentional plagiarism, on the other hand, usually results from mistakes in using quotation marks, paraphrasing or citing sources (282).

These suggestions are offered to help prevent plagiarism:

  • keep an accurate working bibliography

  • take notes consistently and list sources and page numbers

  • use quotation marks to identify direct quotes

  • use summaries and paraphrases (your own words)

  • use parenthetical citations

Good researchers also know what does not need to be documented:

  • common knowledge items

  • facts available in a variety of sources

  • your own observations, thoughts, or feelings


These items, however, must be documented to prevent plagiarism:

  • direct quotations

  • facts not widely known or arguable assertions

  • judgments, opinions, and claims of others

  • statistics, charts, tables, and graphs from ANY source

So, how do you avoid plagiarism?  INTEXT CITATIONS.

The first step is to keep a good working bibliography.  When taking notes, remember to write down the source and get the page number.  Most of your information will be in one of the following forms:

DIRECT QUOTATIONS
This is when you copy the author's words exactly as they appear in the text.  You must remember to write them exactly, identify a speaker, use quotation marks, and cite a source.  If you eliminate part of the quotation, use ellipses (...).  If you add additional information, put that part in brackets [ ].  If there is an error (grammar, spelling, usage) in the direct quote, immediately following the error put [sic]; this identification tells your reader that you recognize the error, but you are leaving it because it is how the author wrote it.
    Examples:
    Mrs. Carroll stated, "Plagiarism is a serious crime" (14).
        Please note that you do not to restate the author in the parenthetical reference
        if the author is addressed as the speaker.
    Mrs. Carroll stated, "Plagiarism is a . . . crime" (14).
    Mrs. Carroll stated, "Plagiarism is a [very] serious crime" (14).

SUMMARIES AND PARAPHRASES
When you summarize, you condense what you read to the basics.  These items are written in your own words but must be documented because they are the ideas of others.  Likewise, paraphrasing involves rewriting the entire selection (not condensing it) into your own words.  Even though this writing is your own, the ideas are not and must be documented.
    Example:
    According to a recent article, plagiarism involves stealing another's work and
    should be treated as a serious crime (Carroll 14).

Notice that you do not use quotation marks.  You could identify the source at the beginning or just start with plagiarism.  Since the author is not mentioned in the selections, he or she must be identified in the parenthetical reference.

YOUR OWN WORK
Your own work is just that yours.  You do not need to document your own thoughts, feelings, or ideas.  But remember that you will not use I to express them.  You will simply state them as facts.
    Example:
    You want to say:  I think schools must be strict and consistent in enforcing
    their plagiarism policy so that we take responsibility for our writing and
    researching.

    You might write--
    Schools must be both strict and consistent in enforcing their plagiarism policy to
    force students to take responsibility for their writing and researching.
 

Plagiarism is one of the most important things about writing.  You must avoid copying another's work without giving him or her credit.  The penalty both in this class and at the college level is severe.  Seek help when in doubt.

For more information on plagiarism, check out these sites:
A Guide for Writing Research Papers
Nuts and Bolts Guide of College Writing
Research Paper Help

 

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Additional Resources

Writing a research paper is not easy.  It requires patience, attention to detail, perseverance, organization, good writing, logic, and considerable time and effort.

However, it is certainly a doable task.  Writing a successful paper will be one of the most important things you will learn in preparation for college. Understanding how to find a topicresearch, stay organized, create a thesis, structure your paper, and avoid plagiarism are all skills you will need, regardless of your major or the university you attend.

For more information on any of the topics discussed, these sites (many of which have already been mentioned) will be helpful.  In addition, I have included links to sites with additional links, grammar help sites, and some books that will prove handy resources.

SITES
A Guide for Writing Research Papers
How to Write an Essay
A Student's Guide to Research with the WWW
Constructing your Research Paper
Idea Generator
Start Your Research Here
Research Paper Information Page
Research Paper Help
Nuts and Bolts Guide of College Writing
Research Paper. Com
Sample Paper
Resource for Writers and Writing Instructors
UE Library
Evansville Vanderburgh County Library
Common Errors in English

Elements of Style (a great site for improving style in writing)
University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign Grammar Handbook
Guide to Grammar and Style
Modern Language Association
(MLA)
OneLook Dictionaries
Online English Grammar
Purdue Online Writing Lab
Rensselaer Writing Center
School House Rock Grammar
(this one is just fun)

BOOKS
Lunsford, Andrea and Robert Connors.  The Everyday Writer:  A Brief Reference
    NY:  St. Martin's Press, 1997.
Sebranek, Patrick. et. al.  Write for College Wilmington, MA:  Great Source
    Education Group, 1997.

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